Keep working on it, good or bad. Construct a book like a castle, building on the foundation you put in place for the first draft. With more experience, the better it will become. Once you finish one thing, the more confidence you will have in seeing the finish line for another.
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Please go to the last chapter if you want to critique the actual story part.
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My Process of Writing a Novel, Walkthrough
RandomStep by step I show you what to do to finish a story, from the first draft to final edit. You can do it the same as me, or perhaps you can take away ideas to meld into your writing process.